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Dad by ~beatles-lover:iconbeatles-lover:





Dad...so many images come to mind
whenever I speak your name;
It seems without you in my life
things have never been the same.

What happened to those lazy days
when I was just a child;
When my life was consumed in you,
in your love, and in your smile.

What happened to all those times when
I always looked at you;
No matter what happened in my life
you always made my gray skies blue.

Dad, some days I hear your voice
and turn to see your face;
Yet in my turning...it seems
the sound had been erased.

Dad, who can I turn to
when life does not make sense;
Who will be there to hold me close
when pieces just don't fit?

Oh, Dad, if I could turn back time
and once more hear your voice;
I'd tell you that out of all dads
you would still be my choice.

Please always know I love you
and no one can take your place;
Years may come and go
but your memory will never erase.
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Submitted: March 22
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This may sound like my father's dead, but he's not. I'm actually estranged from my father but if I could turn back time I'd fix him to make it so he didn't get hurt that one day at work therefore didn't need pain medication he'd eventually get addicted to.

This is a submission for a contest to *RawEm0tion.

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~kairi9889:iconkairi9889: Mar 22, 2008, 9:58:01 PM
i never knew he got addicted to pain medication! i always thought he was just an asshole.....
sorry, tori

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It's the perfect denial
Such a beautiful lie to believe in
So beautiful, beautiful it makes me
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~goobster013:icongoobster013: Mar 23, 2008, 9:17:10 AM
very touching!

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Elizabeth: You and I are alike. There will come a moment when you have a chance to show it. To do the right thing.

(Captain) Jack: I love those moments. I like to wave at them as they pass by.

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=Deltabeta:iconDeltabeta: Mar 28, 2008, 1:57:20 PM Mood: Love
Ah...I cried a bit. wow...I'm too emotional. lol. I loved this so much. Great poem! Amazing rhyme scheme also. It was really good. :D :hug:

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"L'identité est important quand tu veux savoir le monde"
~beatles-lover:iconbeatles-lover: Mar 29, 2008, 1:47:16 PM
wow! thank you so much!! :glomp:

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And I know and I know it just doesn't feel like a night out with no one sizing you up. I've never been so surrepticious so of course I'll be distracted when I strike the punch. - Panic! At The Disco
~beatles-lover:iconbeatles-lover: Mar 29, 2008, 1:50:24 PM
thank you! :hug:

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And I know and I know it just doesn't feel like a night out with no one sizing you up. I've never been so surrepticious so of course I'll be distracted when I strike the punch. - Panic! At The Disco
~beatles-lover:iconbeatles-lover: Mar 29, 2008, 1:51:05 PM
don't worry about it! hahaha but the second part is right, too.

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And I know and I know it just doesn't feel like a night out with no one sizing you up. I've never been so surrepticious so of course I'll be distracted when I strike the punch. - Panic! At The Disco
=Deltabeta:iconDeltabeta: Mar 29, 2008, 6:03:11 PM
Your so welcome! :heart: God bless you.

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My Photography Contest

"L'identité est important quand tu veux savoir le monde"
~beatles-lover:iconbeatles-lover: Mar 29, 2008, 7:10:27 PM
you, too!

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And I know and I know it just doesn't feel like a night out with no one sizing you up. I've never been so surrepticious so of course I'll be distracted when I strike the punch. - Panic! At The Disco
~goobster013:icongoobster013: Mar 30, 2008, 1:30:08 AM
:hug: you're totally welcome!

--
Elizabeth: You and I are alike. There will come a moment when you have a chance to show it. To do the right thing.

(Captain) Jack: I love those moments. I like to wave at them as they pass by.

*Pirates of the Caribbean 2*